Holes and Broken Wings
i am stuck inside the tornadoof myself, and i can't stopspinning 'round and 'round.my skies collapse, become crumbsdue to the macho gusts of wind.at least we don't have to worry'bout that hole in the...
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Had I know you falling there would have been feather pillows laid out catch you. This is a great piece, well penned.ff
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Annie this is superb..the imagery is great and is enhanced by the feelings. Nice to read you again. Deb
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Tara,Another Wow piece! Often, we seem to get a huge dose of events that effect this way. The winds swirl then relax again. I love reading your work.Annette
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I know this feeling very well, beautifully expressed and very well done. Thanks for sharing. ~Mystic~"Hey dad look at me, think back and talk to me. Did I grow up according to plan? Do you think I'm...
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tornado of myself is a surprise tara! you have written another lovely gem!_________________may failures be miles behind us and never accelerate!!!!!
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Great read! BRAVO!! I so enjoyed your expression in this.. poignant and full of life and it's circumstances..Touching my heart..sharon
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A gem, a storm...a beautiful write...well done, Tara! You always outdo yourself.Thanks.~NehaYou are in love with me, I shall make you perplexed. Do not build much, for I intend to have you in ruins.If...
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I think "of myself" could be removed from the first verse. It seems to force a fact rather than leave the interpretation up to the reader.i am stuck inside the tornadoand i can't stop spinning 'round...
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